Ends up I hated my last key hook. I decided imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, so just do it exactly like the girl did in the pin, and here is the results.same H as in my other monograms.
I'll be honest I'm not sure I like this, but I definitely like it more than my last three attempts. Attempt 1 and 2 were so bad I didn't even post them. Attempt 1 even broke my color printer.